From: Gerson Goldhaber (g_goldhaber@lbl.gov)
Date: Fri Apr 11 2003 - 15:38:48 PDT
Rob,
Here are some bugs:
p1. middle of abstract: addition NOT additional
p.4 10 lines form bottom: are spaced... not are at spaced
p8 middle first column: ...fit to templates NOT template
p11 near bottom 2nd rowdata of H96 NOT date
P16 bottom second column : shows the H96 NOT shows treats the H96
p18 first column last line: six days NOT five days (to be consistent
with earlier definition)
We all agree that the color measurement in P99 was poor. In fact that is
why we did not show it.
I see no point in emphasizing now that it was a very poor measurement. I
would leave off the dotted curves in Fig 5. I am not sure about
showing the dashed lines in Fig 6
The paper is looking good now ! cheers Gerson
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