From: Gerson Goldhaber (g_goldhaber@lbl.gov)
Date: Fri May 02 2003 - 11:36:44 PDT
Hi Rob,
Don't worry. We have 11 new SNe vs their 8. Anyhow great paper!
Comments:
p4 left hand side,end and beginning of paragraph
...reported in this paper are AT spaced... leave out AT
Spectra are obtained AT with ... leave out
AT
Sne Ib/c change to SNe Ib/c
p7 right hand side below middle
The first 90 days... should read ; The
first 100 days ...
Table 4 last line
199fG is presumably 1994G should go to line 3
re Table 4, I think we should comment that most of the s values are
within 0.1 of the s values with the old B-template (SCP1997) of
Goldhaber 2001. One major exception 1992bi which has gone from 1.55 to
0.86 a different minimum. Two other SNe 1994al and 1996cl differ
(old-new) by -0.175 and 0.167
respectively.
This could be a Table 4 footnote
p13 right hand side near end of paragraph
...and > 3 - \sigma above ... should read ...and >
3\sigma above ... presumably
p17 left hand side near middle
...between the reddening HIGH AND REDSHIFT SUPERNOVAE ...
please clarify
place Fig 4 before Fig 5.
p22 right hand side near middle
Figure 5 should be Figure 7 ??
p25 left hand side near end of paragraph
methodologiCes sp
also near bottom
...the minimum chisq value .... is 0.28 magnitudes lower ...
should not say magnitudes
Fig 5 should be Fig 8 also on P26 check Figure
numbers on these pages
p26 left near bottom
... from a significant ABOUT of host-galaxy ... should
be BOUT ??
p27 right near bottom
UNappropriately should be
INappropriately
p28 left middle
Gravitation lensing ... should be
GravitationAL lensing ...
a few lines further
... compact objects OF the total ... should be ...
compact objects IN the total ...
p28 right middle
...additional work AS been done ... should be
...additional work HAS been done ...
p29 right 1/3 down
... on nearby SNe Ia OF strongly limit ... should be ...on
nearby SN Ia strongly limit...
1/3 from bottom
....this smaller than .. should
be ...this IS smaller than...
p32 left near bottom
w = -1.15
+/-
incorrect +/- type
this is all I could find cheers Gerson
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