Re: manuscript

From: Mamoru Doi (doi@ioa.s.u-tokyo.ac.jp)
Date: Fri May 28 2004 - 03:22:54 PDT

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    Dear Chris,

    Thank you for the corrections and reminding me about SuF02-057.
    The version I downloaded still looks the same as the previous one.
    But I think you will have a revised version for yoru submission.
    I have no more comments.

    Cheers,

    -Mamoru

    At 04:45 04/05/28, Chris Lidman wrote:
    >Dear Mamoru,
    > Thank you for the corrections. I have incorporated the corrections
    >into the paper. I intend to submit the paper tomorrow evening Chilean
    >time.
    >
    > The service observer did try to observe both SuF02-057 and SuF02-081
    >at the same time but there was no sign of a trace for the former, so
    >it may have been that the acquisition could not be done with sufficient
    >accuracy. Hence, I instructed the observer to abort the observation
    >and to reaquire SuF02-081 alone.
    >
    >Regards,
    >
    >Chris.
    >
    >On Mon, 2004-05-24 at 06:26, Mamoru Doi wrote:
    >> Hi Chris,
    >>
    >> Thank you very much for your revising the manuscript.
    >> Your revisions were perfect, but, I am sorry, I made a mistake
    >> when I wrote my previous e-mail.
    >>
    >> Suprime Cam GTO was 2001, and no spectroscopy with VLT at that time.
    >> Search 6 and 7 were (or more precisely, some of April obs. and
    >> all May obs. were) part of the Subaru Deep Field Project.
    >>
    >> Sp could you modify footnotes of the Table 1?
    >> (old)
    >> Search 6 was..
    >> Search 7 was..
    >>
    >> (new)
    >> Search 6 and 7 were part of the Subaru Deep Field Project (Kodaira et
    al. 2003)
    >> (footnote number 1, 2, 3 -> 1, 1, 2 for Searches 6, 7, and 8 respectively)
    >>
    >> And please remove Miyazaki et al. from References.
    >>
    >> By the way, VLT spectroscopy of SuF02-057 might be
    >> carried out together with 081. I am not sure if
    >> your could put the slit on these two objects
    >> together. Could you check?
    >>
    >> Cheers,
    >>
    >> -Mamoru
    >>
    >> At 03:32 04/05/21, Chris Lidman wrote:
    >> >Hi Mamoru (with cc to Rob and Reynald),
    >> > I've included all your suggestions and I have updated the version
    >> >which is available on the web.
    >> >
    >> >http://www.sc.eso.org/~clidman
    >> >
    >> >I rephrased the text that you wrote for the acknowledgments. Please
    >> >check what I have written carefully.
    >> >
    >> >Tony, Rob, Reynald, we should also acknowledge CTIO and CFHT. Can you
    >> >send me some text that I could include.
    >> >
    >> >Cheers, Chris.
    >> >
    >> >On Thu, 2004-05-20 at 06:25, Mamoru Doi wrote:
    >> >> Hi Chris and Tony,
    >> >>
    >> >> I would like to ask a few possible revisions mostly for politics.
    >> >>
    >> >> (1) Subaru Telescopes policy says
    >> >> (http://subarutelescope.org/Observing/Proposals/Publish/index.html)
    >> >> "We hope that the data you obtain with Subaru Telescope will achieve its
    >> >> intended science goals. All papers which make use of data taken with
    >> >> Subaru Telescope facilities should include the following acknowledgment
    >> >> on the title page as a footnote to the title.
    >> >> ""Based in part on data collected at Subaru Telescope, which is operated
    >> >> by the National Astronomical Observatory of Japan. ""
    >> >>
    >> >> The current case is marginal, since we used Subaru for search, but
    >> >> data described in details are only with VLT.
    >> >> Did you check if other telescopes (CFHT and CTIO) request similar
    >> >> ackowledgements?
    >> >>
    >> >>
    >> >> (2) We would like to include Suprime-Cam GTO and the Subaru Observatory
    >> >> Projects explicitly somehow. One candidate place is probably at the
    >> >> following place in a footnote.
    >> >>
    >> >> p.2 right line 4
    >> >> seraches 6, 7, and 8*(footnote)
    >> >>
    >> >> footnote
    >> >> *: Search 6 was a part of Suprime-Cam (Miyazaki et al. 2002) commisioning
    >> >> observing runs,
    >> >> Search 7 was a part of Subaru Deep Field Project (Kodaira et al.
    >2003), and
    >> >> Search 8 was a part of Subaru XMM/Newton Deep Survey (Sekiguchi et al.
    >> >> in preparation).
    >> >>
    >> >> References
    >> >> Kodaira,K. Taniguchi,Y. Kashikawa,N. et al. 2003, PASJ, 55L, 17
    >> >> Miyazaki,S., Komiyama,Y., Sekiguchi,M. et al. 2002, PASJ, 54, 833
    >> >>
    >> >>
    >> >> (3) We would like to ask you to include the following ackowledgement
    >> >> for our grants.
    >> >>
    >> >> Subaru searches were supported in part by Grant-in-aid of Scientific
    >> >> Research (15204012) of the Ministry of Education, Science,
    >> >> Culture, and Sports of Japan, and in part by a Japan Society for the
    >> >> Promotion of Science (a Joint Research Bilateral Program between Japan
    >> >> and USA).
    >> >>
    >> >> Thanks a lot,
    >> >>
    >> >> -Mamoru
    >> >>
    >> >>
    >> >>
    >> >>
    >> >> Mamoru Doi
    >> >> Institute of Astronomy
    >> >> School of Science
    >> >> University of Tokyo
    >> >> voice +81-422-34-5084
    >> >> fax. +81-422-34-5041
    >> >> doi@ioa.s.u-tokyo.ac.jp
    >> >>
    >> >>
    >>
    >>
    >> Mamoru Doi
    >> Institute of Astronomy
    >> School of Science
    >> University of Tokyo
    >> voice +81-422-34-5084
    >> fax. +81-422-34-5041
    >> doi@ioa.s.u-tokyo.ac.jp
    >>
    >>

    Mamoru Doi
    Institute of Astronomy
    School of Science
    University of Tokyo
    voice +81-422-34-5084
    fax. +81-422-34-5041
    doi@ioa.s.u-tokyo.ac.jp



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