Re: manuscript

From: Chris Lidman (clidman@eso.org)
Date: Thu May 27 2004 - 12:45:30 PDT

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    Dear Mamoru,
      Thank you for the corrections. I have incorporated the corrections
    into the paper. I intend to submit the paper tomorrow evening Chilean
    time.

      The service observer did try to observe both SuF02-057 and SuF02-081
    at the same time but there was no sign of a trace for the former, so
    it may have been that the acquisition could not be done with sufficient
    accuracy. Hence, I instructed the observer to abort the observation
    and to reaquire SuF02-081 alone.

    Regards,

    Chris.

    On Mon, 2004-05-24 at 06:26, Mamoru Doi wrote:
    > Hi Chris,
    >
    > Thank you very much for your revising the manuscript.
    > Your revisions were perfect, but, I am sorry, I made a mistake
    > when I wrote my previous e-mail.
    >
    > Suprime Cam GTO was 2001, and no spectroscopy with VLT at that time.
    > Search 6 and 7 were (or more precisely, some of April obs. and
    > all May obs. were) part of the Subaru Deep Field Project.
    >
    > Sp could you modify footnotes of the Table 1?
    > (old)
    > Search 6 was..
    > Search 7 was..
    >
    > (new)
    > Search 6 and 7 were part of the Subaru Deep Field Project (Kodaira et al. 2003)
    > (footnote number 1, 2, 3 -> 1, 1, 2 for Searches 6, 7, and 8 respectively)
    >
    > And please remove Miyazaki et al. from References.
    >
    > By the way, VLT spectroscopy of SuF02-057 might be
    > carried out together with 081. I am not sure if
    > your could put the slit on these two objects
    > together. Could you check?
    >
    > Cheers,
    >
    > -Mamoru
    >
    > At 03:32 04/05/21, Chris Lidman wrote:
    > >Hi Mamoru (with cc to Rob and Reynald),
    > > I've included all your suggestions and I have updated the version
    > >which is available on the web.
    > >
    > >http://www.sc.eso.org/~clidman
    > >
    > >I rephrased the text that you wrote for the acknowledgments. Please
    > >check what I have written carefully.
    > >
    > >Tony, Rob, Reynald, we should also acknowledge CTIO and CFHT. Can you
    > >send me some text that I could include.
    > >
    > >Cheers, Chris.
    > >
    > >On Thu, 2004-05-20 at 06:25, Mamoru Doi wrote:
    > >> Hi Chris and Tony,
    > >>
    > >> I would like to ask a few possible revisions mostly for politics.
    > >>
    > >> (1) Subaru Telescopes policy says
    > >> (http://subarutelescope.org/Observing/Proposals/Publish/index.html)
    > >> "We hope that the data you obtain with Subaru Telescope will achieve its
    > >> intended science goals. All papers which make use of data taken with
    > >> Subaru Telescope facilities should include the following acknowledgment
    > >> on the title page as a footnote to the title.
    > >> ""Based in part on data collected at Subaru Telescope, which is operated
    > >> by the National Astronomical Observatory of Japan. ""
    > >>
    > >> The current case is marginal, since we used Subaru for search, but
    > >> data described in details are only with VLT.
    > >> Did you check if other telescopes (CFHT and CTIO) request similar
    > >> ackowledgements?
    > >>
    > >>
    > >> (2) We would like to include Suprime-Cam GTO and the Subaru Observatory
    > >> Projects explicitly somehow. One candidate place is probably at the
    > >> following place in a footnote.
    > >>
    > >> p.2 right line 4
    > >> seraches 6, 7, and 8*(footnote)
    > >>
    > >> footnote
    > >> *: Search 6 was a part of Suprime-Cam (Miyazaki et al. 2002) commisioning
    > >> observing runs,
    > >> Search 7 was a part of Subaru Deep Field Project (Kodaira et al. 2003), and
    > >> Search 8 was a part of Subaru XMM/Newton Deep Survey (Sekiguchi et al.
    > >> in preparation).
    > >>
    > >> References
    > >> Kodaira,K. Taniguchi,Y. Kashikawa,N. et al. 2003, PASJ, 55L, 17
    > >> Miyazaki,S., Komiyama,Y., Sekiguchi,M. et al. 2002, PASJ, 54, 833
    > >>
    > >>
    > >> (3) We would like to ask you to include the following ackowledgement
    > >> for our grants.
    > >>
    > >> Subaru searches were supported in part by Grant-in-aid of Scientific
    > >> Research (15204012) of the Ministry of Education, Science,
    > >> Culture, and Sports of Japan, and in part by a Japan Society for the
    > >> Promotion of Science (a Joint Research Bilateral Program between Japan
    > >> and USA).
    > >>
    > >> Thanks a lot,
    > >>
    > >> -Mamoru
    > >>
    > >>
    > >>
    > >>
    > >> Mamoru Doi
    > >> Institute of Astronomy
    > >> School of Science
    > >> University of Tokyo
    > >> voice +81-422-34-5084
    > >> fax. +81-422-34-5041
    > >> doi@ioa.s.u-tokyo.ac.jp
    > >>
    > >>
    >
    >
    > Mamoru Doi
    > Institute of Astronomy
    > School of Science
    > University of Tokyo
    > voice +81-422-34-5084
    > fax. +81-422-34-5041
    > doi@ioa.s.u-tokyo.ac.jp
    >
    >



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