Here are the comments on the last few pages.

From: Saul Perlmutter (saul@LBL.gov)
Date: Sun May 04 2003 - 00:39:07 PDT

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    Hi again,
        Ok, I've kept myself awake (after my 9 AM to 6 PM class today) to
    finish up the comments on the last few pages. As you'll see, most of
    them are pretty easy to use (you may already have fixed many of them).
    One of the main things is rearranging the order of points in the
    Conclusion.

        I haven't been able to log in today to read email (or the hstpaper
    archive) so I don't know how things are going with everybody's
    comments, but my overall impression from the paper itself is that
    things are generally looking pretty good! I'll have to go to sleep
    after I send this off, but I'll log in tomorrow to read the backlog of
    email and see where things stand (and if there are things I can do to
    help).

        I hope you're doing ok at your end! --Saul





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