From: Reynald Pain (Reynald.Pain@in2p3.fr)
Date: Fri May 02 2003 - 12:07:29 PDT
Hi Rob,
a few (random) points:
title: add CFTH in footnote 1
"based in part on ...
Canada-France-Hawaii-telescope, operated by the National Research
Concil of Canada, le Centre National de la Recherche Scientifique de
France, and the University of Hawaii"
maybe also add CFHT staff" in the acknowledgement
author list:
N. Regnault : Now at LLR, CNRS-IN2P3, Ecole Polytechnique, Palaiseau,
France
G. Blanc : Now at LPNHE, ...
abstract ; remove the \sim in 0.05 (identified systematics)
page 22, line 4 : replace <\sim-1/2 by <-1/3 (the eq is
a_doubledot/a=-4pi/3G(rho+3p) )
typos : p9: icolor/color, p22 vairation/variation, p23:constat/constant
fig 10 does not show dashed contours (referred to in the caption)
replace "Current SCP" by "SCP 2003" ?
It may just be a wrong impression but most of the ground based data seem
to be above the lightcurve template. It looks like there is some
systematic shift in HST vs groundbased zeropoints ?
also see my previous email on 98be and 98ay LCs.
Cheers,
Reynald
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