From: Chris Lidman (clidman@eso.org)
Date: Tue Jun 28 2005 - 04:40:36 PDT
Hi Gabriele,
The paper looks fine. Thank you for doing the modifications I
requested.
We have an SCP exec. meeting later this afternoon. I hope that we
can give
you the all clear for submission then.
I saw a couple of minor typos that should be fix before submission.
There is no
need for you to provide us with a new version on your web page.
Cheers, Chris.
List of minor typos
==============
Section 2.2, 1st paragraph - The Lidman and Hook references should be
enclosed in brackets, i.e.
(Lidman et al. 2005; Hook et al. 2005)
Section 2.2 2nd paragraph - "these four wavelength regions" - this
should be rephrased as this is
where the reader is introduced to the four wavelength regions that you
use for sub-typing.
Section 3.3, 2nd paragraph - The second closing parentheis in
Leibundgut et al. should be removed.
Section 3.2.1, 2nd paragraph - "following" -> "follows"
Section 4, last paragraph - "e.g" -> "e.g." and "projects)" ->
"projects),"
On Jun 27, 2005, at 10:26 AM, Gabriele Garavini wrote:
> Dear Chris,
>
> thanks you very much for your comments,
> I've implemented them all in the new draft available at
> http://supernovae.in2p3.fr/~garavini/papers/
>
> Please let me if there is something I missed or some additional
> comments before submission.
> Cheers
> Gabriele
>
> On Jun 18, 2005, at 5:52 AM, Chris Lidman wrote:
>
>> Hi Gabriele,
>> I've read through the paper and I have 3 sets of comments. The first
>> two concern
>> the need to take into account the changes that were made to Isobel's
>> recently
>> submitted paper. The 3rd set concern grammar.
>>
>> I attach these comments. You might want to read Isobel's paper once
>> more.
>>
>> Greg's point b) is important. EWs will scale as 1+z. Were the EWs
>> in the paper
>> corrected for z? If you deredshifted the spectra before computing the
>> EWs, then
>> this correction is not necessary.
>>
>> Regards, Chris.
>>
>> <comments_17062005_CLi.txt>
>>
>> On Jun 16, 2005, at 5:41 AM, Gabriele Garavini wrote:
>>
>>> Dear All,
>>>
>>> I've included all the latest comments from Greg in the new version
>>> of the Evolution paper.
>>> Please find the new draft at supernovae.in2p3.fr/~garavini/papers/
>>>
>>> I'll be waiting for the green light to submission.
>>>
>>> Thank you all.
>>> Cheers
>>> Gabriele
>>>
>>> On Jun 2, 2005, at 2:59 AM, Tony Spadafora wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hi Gabriele,
>>>>
>>>> Greg has sent you the pdf of his marked up version. For the others
>>>> on this e-mail, you can see it at :
>>>> http://panisse.lbl.gov/collab/archive/evolution/0056.html
>>>>
>>>> These seem to be helpful clarifications and language corrections -
>>>> all of which will make for a better paper and shouldn't take long
>>>> to implement. When you are making a revised version, please remove
>>>> Rob's name from the author list. (the institution numbering is not
>>>> affected.)
>>>>
>>>> When you have a finished version let us know. I'll then send out a
>>>> note saying you'll submit it a few days later.
>>>>
>>>> -Tony
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
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