From: Gaston Folatelli (gaston@physto.se)
Date: Sat Oct 25 2003 - 14:53:35 PDT
Dear Chris and collaborators,
I have posted a new version of the EW paper on the usual place:
http://www.physto.se/~snova/private/internal.html
(usual SCP access), under "Paper Drafts".
There is also a link to the paper draft history page, with all previous 
versions and refereeing comments.
I'd like to summarize here the changes that I have made, based on Chris', 
again, very helpful comments.
I changed the symbols used in Figures 2 through 9 to represent the 
three subtypes of SNe Ia described in this paper. Now, normal SNe have 
black circles, 1991T-like have open circles and 1991bg-like have open 
squares. SN 1999ac was left aside this classification and is marked 
with triangles. Everything is black and white, continuing with this 
economical mood I seem to be in.
The new symbols serve in distinguishing very clearly the cases of normal 
and either of the peculiar types, to the expense of loosing detailed 
information about each SN in particular. I was not using such detailed 
information anyway in the paper, so the change is quite sensible. 
This change doesn't only involve the aesthetics of the plots. The clearer 
distinction of the subtypes in the plots helped me accomplish what I think 
is a more clear analysis in Section 4, with more emphasis on the 
homogeneity issue. In particular, the Tables (4, 5 and 6) were changed to  
reflect the differences among the Ia subclasses in a quantitative way.
I tried to address all of Chris' points. There were several details which 
I corrected following his suggestions. And there were other more 
crucial worries:
* Distances: I changed to H_o = 72. And I averaged distances given by Saha 
with those of Freedman, where we have both. There is still some 
inhomogeneity in the distance estimations. No single source can be used to 
cover not even half of the SNe in Table 7. We will probably have to 
live with that. The changes in the distances were propagated to M_B and 
the correlations of Sec. 5.
* Other correlations tried: I mention them now. However, I didn't add 
any new parameter in Table 7 not to mess it up. Nor did I add a new table 
with this information for the same reason. I don't think that is needed, 
but I am a very open-minded person...
* Section 5.2 disappears because of not beeing well founded and because of 
lack of data.
* Conclusions: They look more like actual conclusions now. And I tried to 
be concise and to emphasize the best correlation I found.
Less important changes: (but read below anyway!)
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* We have a brand new title. This time, even featuring a subtitle! It is 
the one suggested by Chris, although I changed "indices" for 
"indicators", which sounds similar and saves me from thinking of 
radioastronomy whenever I say "spectral index". It's not that I disliked 
radioastronomy as an undergrad, and also, I am not a native  English 
speaker, but if "indicator" works for you, I'd rather use it instead. 
The abstract has also changed but that will keep on changing until the 
end, I guess.
* I quitted using double spacing. There has not been much use of it lately
and we have to save the Swedish (and other) forests. Please tell me if you 
need a double-spaced version in order to write down on the hard copy.
* Version 6.1 of the draft will use ApJ's latex macro since it seems we 
are aiming to send it there. I hope I don't hurt any national feelings by 
still using the A&A macro...
I hope you can enjoy this new version as much as I did (sigh). Please send 
your comments or tell me if you have problems when retrieving the file.
Cheers,
  -Gastón
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