From: Chris Lidman (clidman@eso.org)
Date: Mon Apr 18 2005 - 11:25:48 PDT
Hi Alex,
Thanks for the new version. I read it and it looks fine. I noticed
a couple of typos, which I list below.
p. 3, 2nd paragraph - "which can bias the ? under"
p.25, 1st paragraph - "is not be the same"
p.41, Fig. 8 - Four curves a plotted in the figure but only three are
annotated
in the bottom right corner of the figure.
pp. 46-47, CMAG -> CMAGIC in Fig. 12 and 13. "to same" -> "to the same"
Regards,
Chris.
On Apr 13, 2005, at 5:18 PM, Alexander Conley wrote:
> Following the comments of Saul and Chris, I have
> issued another version of the CMAGIC paper. Saul
> convinced me to move large chunks of section 9.2
> to an appendix. I have also now looked at the ApJ
> instructions to authors and tried to modify things
> along those lines. Furthermore, Lifan and Tony
> had a number of suggestions related to various
> figures, which have (mostly) been implemented.
>
> Available in the usual place as version 1.57 :
> http://panisse.lbl.gov/~aconley/cmag/
>
> I probably won't be able to do anything major
> on this paper until I am settled in Toronto --
> say May 1st.
>
> Remaining things to do:
> 1) Author list
> 2) Get a source for the LSST/DMT supernova search
> 3) Figure out how to improve figure 3 (schematic of
> why dust affects CMAGIC less)
> 4) Maybe add a flat Universe line to the Hubble diagram,
> although unless something else is removed the plot becomes
> too confusing. Alternatively, I could do what we always do
> and make a unreadably thin Hubble residual plot instead.
>
> Alex
>
>
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