From: Gabriele Garavini (garavini@in2p3.fr)
Date: Sun Jan 02 2005 - 03:12:51 PST
Hi Saul,
thank you very much. I'll go through the new draft in the coming week.
Great 2005 to you.
Cheers
Gabriele
On Sat, 1 Jan 2005, Saul Perlmutter wrote:
> Hi Gabrele,
> I *was* able to go through the 99ac paper, and make fixes (primarly
> to the language). I think in general the paper looks quite good now!
>
> A few things left for you to do: Do a "diff" on this draft to
> compare it with the previous one to make sure that I didn't
> misunderstand any of your sentences when I corrected them. Then look
> for the places where I put questions/comments in triple
> brackets/asterixes, "[[[" and/or "***", and let me know what the
> answers are for them.
>
> I hope you have a great 2005! Regards, --Saul
>
>
>
> Gabriele Garavini wrote:
>
> >Dear Saul,
> >
> >I attache the latex file of the paper on 99ac. As we said during the
> >phone-conference we need to review the language. Right after the phone
> >conference I remembered that the paper has been extensively reviewed by
> >Rollin, and he has already changed and corrected the English of most of
> >the paper. So I would tend to think the sections that really need some
> >rewording are those I've added lately. These are section 5.1 and 6.
> >
> >Since you are the internal reviewer I thought I would make sense for you
> >to have a look first. I think we could start with those two sections. It
> >would be great if this could be done in the coming two weeks or so. In
> >principle after those sections are corrected the paper could go out to the
> >collaboration.
> >
> >This would really put the paper on a fast-track for publication. I'll be
> >in Berkeley from the 19th to the 27th of January, in those days we could
> >wrap up everything and get the papers (also the evolution one) as close to
> >be ready for submission as possible. I would hope to submit them at the
> >beginning of February or so.
> >
> >Thank you very much
> >Merry Xmas to all of you and your families
> >
> >Cheers
> >Gabriele
> >
>
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