July 10 HST paper comments (minor!)

From: Greg Aldering (aldering@panisse.lbl.gov)
Date: Thu Jul 10 2003 - 23:27:34 PDT

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    Hi Rob,

    I read the body of the July 10 HST paper, except for section 5, the
    references and the figure captions - which seem to have stabilized. I
    hope these are my last comments on the HST paper (modulo the Hubble
    diagram of grouped data).

    Tiny fix in the abstract:

       "... at higher redshifts." ---> "... at high redshift."

    On page 13 "(SED)" is never used again so you may as well eliminate it.

    On page 20 "... of each samples are ..." ---> "... of each sample are ..."

    On page 22 "... = 0.99." ---> "... > 0.99." (I checked the fit table)

    On page 22 "Recent data on ..." ---> "Recent ground-based data on ..."

    On page 36 "... to address the properties ..." --->
               "... better measure the properties ..."

    On page 37 "P. E. Nugent acknowledges support ..." --->
               "This work was supported in part by a NASA LTSA grant to
                PEN, GA, SP and SED."

    - Greg

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