comments on SC3

From: Greg Aldering (aldering@panisse.lbl.gov)
Date: Sun May 18 2003 - 23:19:33 PDT

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    Somewhere you should make the point that we discussed on Sunday - that the
    error bars on the extinction-correct fits dominate the statistical uncertainty
    and since these are largely independent of the uncertainties going into the
    low-extinction fit the shift between the fits can be accounted for simply by
    the statistical uncertainties.

    p7 : "... 0.02-0.3 ..." ---> "... 0.02-0.03 ..." (I hope!)

    p8 : "the the low-redshift" --> "the low-redshift"

    p18 : "However, if ..." ---> "However, as shown by Equation~A4 of P99, if ..."

    p28 : Third line from bottom: "the the growth" ---> "the growth"

    p38 : in footnote b: "the the low-extinction" ---> "the low-extinction"

    p39 : in the acknowledgements, the sentance starting with "Finally, ..." should
          be moved earlier, before the sentance starting with "This work was supported ..."

    Question: in Figure 12, should the w plots include the 2dFGRS and WMAP constraints
              since we quote that shift in the table? Or, maybe just remind readers of
              this difference in the figure caption.

    - Greg



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